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Originally Posted by Kiwicanuck
Before I push the purchase button on my computer I thought I would look for some quick feed back. I am going to try a A.I. on this trip for a number of reasons. Foremost is that the charter flights are more expensive this year so might as well tack on a little and get the full deal. I am not a mongerer and more of a steady girl friend kind of guy and think I know the answer already but thought I would ask anyway. It's between the Casa Marina Beach or the Sosua by the Sea and my question is can one have visits by there lady friend in either of these places or not.
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DON'T YOU BELIEVE IN COMMAS (,,,,) and periods (...)? You write like a car without brakes! One can have a tough time following the line of your writing.
It's more like:
Before I push the purchase button on my computer(,) I thought I would look for some quick feed back. I am going to try a (an), and what is an (A.I.), any way? A.I. on this trip for a number of reasons. (First and)Foremost(,) (the...) is that the charter flights are more expensive this year(,) so (I) might as well tack on a little and get the full deal. I am not a mongerer (monger)--no such word as (mongerer)and more of a steady girl friend (girlfriend) kind of guy and think I know the answer already(,) but (I) thought I would ask anyway. (

It's between the Casa Marina Beach or the Sosua by the Sea and my question is(,) can one have visits by there (their) or (one's) lady friend in either of these places or not. (or not?) It's a question!!!
Don't feel bad; I usually charge for grammar lessons.